Jane McGonigal presented a valid argument with emotional
perspectives and her logical facts. She claimed that the world needed to
play online games for 21 billion hours a week versus the 3 billion we currently
play. When she made this bold statement, the first thought was that she
does not have enough credibility.
McGonigal is a game designer with a PhD from Berkley California. She has research this phenomenon at the
Institute for the Future. She has also
design three games: World out of oil, superstruct, and evoke. This woman has a variety of education and
experience in the gaming world. She
presented a good argument because of her organization of thoughts and her logic
facts. She has quality organization
because she focused on four points: urgent optimizes, social fabric, blissful
productivity, and epic meaning. Urgent
optimizes from gamers make them believe in themselves as the general population
should believe the world can be a better.
Social fabric is the means of trust and bonds made between the
gamers. The world needs to start bonding
with one another and trust will develop.
The third objective was blissful productivity, which means that the
gamer is happy that he is working hard in order to achieve the optimum
goal. If everyone had this
characteristic, people would work hard and push themselves to higher goal that
can result in more salary. The last
point was epic meaning, which entails the meaning of the journey. Once this journey is done, it is meaningful
for the person and they have hope in higher goals. Her points are valid and she related to the
world’s population well. Her presentation
changed my outlook on online games.
Although she presents a valid argument and provides diverse examples, I
still do not believe the human population should increase 18 billion more hours
a week. The online games that most of
the population play are not meant to better the economy or the world.
You really like how well you explained how successful she's been and all of her different arugments.
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DeleteI loved the way you immediately gave facts to support your argument, as well as bringing up her credibility right off the bat. You use great vocabulary and put together well-thought out sentences.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! I appreciate your crtique and I will continue to use good vocabulary and well organized thoughts.
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